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The name is Laura. It is not Loz or Lauren. 14 years old young. October 19th. Darlington. England. Green Eyes, Long-ish blonde hair. Tall.
Loves : Ronaldo =], Straightners, Makeup, Nice People, Friends, Enrique, Cascada, Rihanna. LOST, Eastenders, Zoey 101, Kebabs, Friends.
Hates : Stealers, Copiers, Homework, Coursework, Tech, Homework, Some Teachers. >>
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Owner : Laura
Host: Samar
Name: true.loveshock.co.uk
Since: Grand Opening
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Updates
May 25th
....18 Icons
....1 Coded Layouts
....4 Layouts
....4 Layout Bases
....1 Downloadable Brush Set
....HTML-Codes Section
....4 Pngs
....2 Reviews
May 19th
....New Homepage
....1 Downloadable Brush Set
....20 Polaroids
Rules
Everything on this site is made by me. All graphics and tutorials. Under no circumstances may you copy, steal or change my work and credit would be nice!
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MY REVIEWS
These are all the reviews people have done on my site! Enjoy!
Becky - Erasethepain
Homepage: 4/5
Great homepage! It gives a great first impression & I like the black & white, and red too lol. One thing I would say is I'm not actually a fan of the thin red border you have round the outside. I think it makes the page look a bit too bunched up together, but that's just my opinion!
Layout: 3/5
I love the picture you have used, especially how it's black & white. I personally don't really like the font you've used and the colour. I think it's quite hard to see the writing on the layout & you could have maybe used a more classy font to suit the picture? I think the whole look of your homepage & everything would have looked better, maybe, if you had used white for the text and just used black, white and shades of grey in your layout.
CSS: 5/5
The CSS is great. I can see no problems with it at all! It all fits in with your layout and the font size is not too big or too small. I especially like your h1 background image along with the dotted red line :)
Content: 13/15
You have plenty of high quality content for your visitors, impressive! I like all of your graphics & you have plenty of downloads & tutorials too. I think you could maybe add some more html codes? Also with your celebrity button bases I think you could maybe make the actual celeb image a bit smaller if you get me, because when people write their site names on their it may be difficult to see it.
Spelling & Grammar: 5/5
This is totally fine. I didn't notice any problems! Well done :)
Organization: 10/10
I think your organization is great. Everything is where it should be and is easy to find. I like how you also have a contact link in the sidebar navigation.
Updates: 5/5
Looking in your most recent blog & your update list in the sidebar the updates look fantastic! Although there is quite a big gap between your most recent update & the previous one, both of them are packed full of updates! Really well done! :D
Overall comments:
Your site is great. I love your sitename too, I've never heard 'true' used as a subdomain before! Just keep up your excellent work xP
Total score: 45/50 = 90%, Grade A*
Katie - Empathy.Colour-burn.co.uk
Site Name 5/5
I love your site name, as you have made your choice of a site name flow with your host's name, which works really well. Its also easy to remember
Enter Page 0/5
Its no biggie not to have an enter page, this is jsut here for sites that do have one.
Hits 4/5
3543 hits, it is an ok amoung of its. Not amazing but not awful. Also your hits are presented well, though maybe insteasd of having it red have it the same colour as the other text which i black, becuase it seems a little too much having differnt coloured text.
Homepage 12/15
Usually black backgrounds looks too dark and dull, but as you have added some white and red, the black overall doesnt seem to harsh. I like how you have used a thin red border and a well matching scroll bar. It shows you have thought of every little detail to make your whole homepage come together more. I also like your title of your homepage, it is 'in fashion' it isnt anything unique but it looks good. Your style how it is in a rectangle type layout, thats just fab, i love it. You have put alot of effort in possitioning these tables etc.. The layout that you have created..well i think that you have created it simple but beautiful, this is a great example how simplicity work. Maybe you should add your site name on so people don't take your layout and claim it as there own, if it isn't yours then its best to make your own to show off your creative side. As for the tables, i love the custom headers and the dashed red lines, you have added all the colours in perfectly. The side bar, it mis possitioned well. the first table is not unique, you can find that on many peoples sites, but thats ok. The Apply? link is great to have, and the information on this page is perfect, love how you have used the bullet points I like the title you have used, 'the VIP's' its unique and stylish, you have a good amoung of 'VIP's' and you disply them good, and also disply them all which is important. The apply? is good to have, and again the page that the apply? leads to if perfectly presented and has good information on. The navigation areas ia ok, you might find it will fit better if you have the text the same as the rest of the text in the other tables and the same colour (black). The section about you i am begin honest in this review, i dont like it, becuase it is common the basic, loves, hates, i never bother reading things like that, as it is SO repeatative on peoples sites, its about you, make it your by useing a differnt style. It will grab peoples attention more, and also if you added an image or something creative in this section.The site informaton is great, again with the links begin black would look better. The button is fab, no complated here, great that you offer the code as well =). I dont see the point in the updates section much. The disclamimer is good. not offence and not soppy. just right ;p. Overall i think you have put alot of effort into your homepage, since it is the main part of your site for the first opinion.
Updates 10/10
Your updates is presented and possitions great. Ooo a topic on money xD. I would use them if they weren't downloadable and they were jsut there xD (the brushes) A perfect blog mixed with your personal life and your site and whats going on, i really like reading it, it was interested and easy to read becuase you have put them in paragraphs. Just all i cna say is keep it up.
Background information 10/10
I love how you ahve the red bullets, it is jsut soemthing different. Affies, already commented on this page. History, perfect, love the useage of paragrahs. My Awards, Aww, i am sure you will receive some soon, mayve you should gall it gifts and awards, and like gifts that you affies give you you can put it here. OMG your so tall, i envy you, i am only 5 foot 3.5 =(. I like the way you have set out this page and made it easy to read, under sub-heading and paragraphs, i am a fan of your site already! I find the past layouts a page every site shouldnt go without. Its great to see the past creations and how they have presented it out, it also means that you hard work with the past layouts wont be forgotten.
Visitors 11/15
I'm not so sure that all these spaces is great, maybe you could think of a differnt way to disply these pages. It looks a little odd. Downloads is great, but i usually never use them xD. Graphics, All are perfect of course =). HTML codes are well sectioned. Great that you have taken photos by yourself =) this is something that you dont see on many sites ^^. Plugboard is a good idea, =) though i dont think it really belongs in this section, or any other..maybe you could have a link on your homepage nav for it? or do something else with it, but it jsut doesnt seem right here. Lovley tutorials =). You have oput alot of effort into this section but still some little improvements need to be made to get top marks here.
Contests 9/10
Lovely, shame there isnt any non-creative competitions. But everyhting is neat and perrrfect ^^.
Guestbook 10/10
You have it on your homepage on your updates and it works really well.
Other 1/5
Contact, maybe you could call it ask me? if not add it into the visitors contect becuase it really belongs there. but it s up to you.
Uniqueness, Professionalism, Neatness 3/5
Great uniqueness, you have done really well but still are soem things that you could adjust. Professionalism, perfect, neatness perfect, apart from the spaces in the visitors navigaiton.
Overall 75/100
You have got a grade B which is a PASS which i have not had in a long time, belive me, so you are currently being advertised until the next person i review gets a pass. Hope your happy with your review, i know i would be! =)
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